I saw this a few years ago and decided to download it. Since then it has sat in a file with dozens of other games I wanted to try one day. Anyways, I finally played it, and I noticed right away the use of the free character sprites (really I'm mostly mentioning it bc I know people who use them tend to get hate thinking it was stolen). Right away I noticed the grammar has room to improve. I did have to sometimes re-read a line because I didn't understand the sentence at first. Try to work on using commas, it would help reduce run-on sentences. There are also a handful of instances of accidently using the wrong word or a typo. (maybe I'm wrong but I'm guessing English isn't your first language) I really liked how at the end of the bad endings we got to see a glimpse of Nigel's thoughts, not sure why but that just stuck out to me in a good way. Stepping back and looking at the actual story being told, it was amazing. I really enjoyed it a lot. It was sweet and heartfelt. I can't figure out the true ending, but that isn't the game's fault I'm just cursed. (only way I have ever gotten a good ending was with walkthoughs T-T)
Edit: right after posting it finally let me have the ending -_- why is my life set on embarrassing myself
It's what the artist where I got the background from intended it to look like as you can see here: https://lemmasoft.renai.us/for... (find Music Room day. This is Uncle Mugen's extra compiled thread from Alte since I can't find it from the original thread). I used it since I can't find any CC Music Room background that time when I made this (or I haven't looked enough). I also find it funny :) either way, thanks for dropping by~
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I saw this a few years ago and decided to download it. Since then it has sat in a file with dozens of other games I wanted to try one day. Anyways, I finally played it, and I noticed right away the use of the free character sprites (really I'm mostly mentioning it bc I know people who use them tend to get hate thinking it was stolen). Right away I noticed the grammar has room to improve. I did have to sometimes re-read a line because I didn't understand the sentence at first. Try to work on using commas, it would help reduce run-on sentences. There are also a handful of instances of accidently using the wrong word or a typo. (maybe I'm wrong but I'm guessing English isn't your first language) I really liked how at the end of the bad endings we got to see a glimpse of Nigel's thoughts, not sure why but that just stuck out to me in a good way. Stepping back and looking at the actual story being told, it was amazing. I really enjoyed it a lot. It was sweet and heartfelt. I can't figure out the true ending, but that isn't the game's fault I'm just cursed. (only way I have ever gotten a good ending was with walkthoughs T-T)
Edit: right after posting it finally let me have the ending -_- why is my life set on embarrassing myself
It's what the artist where I got the background from intended it to look like as you can see here: https://lemmasoft.renai.us/for... (find Music Room day. This is Uncle Mugen's extra compiled thread from Alte since I can't find it from the original thread). I used it since I can't find any CC Music Room background that time when I made this (or I haven't looked enough). I also find it funny :) either way, thanks for dropping by~